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To my Mother and my Father,
Both of whom where never there.
Disowned me when I turned sixteen,
Abandoned without care.
And so for you I leave behind
A black world full of hate
For you to twist and torment in -
All for you is desolate.
To my Brother or my Sister,
Aunt, Uncle and Cousin too,
You simply just ignored me,
Said "There's nothing we can do".
You sat upon the sidelines,
And you all just stared on in;
Watched me spiral downward;
Get swallowed up in Sin.
To my 'friends', you User Bastards,
Who were there to bleed me dry!
I was there when I was needed,
When you were needed, you'd just fly!
To you I give my nothing,
'Cos it's just not good enough!
What else can you take from me?
I'm six foot down, I've no more stuff.
I now write to my girlfriend,
The only one to care.
You watched me like a shadow,
When you were needed, you were there.
My sole and perfect lover,
The one who took my breath,
For you I give eternity,
You join me now in death.
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Something I've been contemplating for a long time...
The song that is, not suicide. I'm perfectly happy!

It was written during the breaks in Synthesis VI.
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:iconsouthparksweetie2:
This acully almost made me cry... You are a wonderful writer, never stop.
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~Darkwolfgirl Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
So awesome, it's epic.
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~Loveless2624 Jan 22, 2009  Student Photographer
Brilliant
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~iamem Aug 23, 2007  Professional Filmographer
i can almost feel the emotions behind.. nicely written..
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~Yllek Sep 12, 2007   Writer
Thanks ^_^
It feels weird looking back at all this now... Wish I could still write like that...
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~iamem Sep 16, 2007  Professional Filmographer
yea, i've noticed its a long while ago, but it really caught my attention..

i'm sure you still can, creativity doesn't just vanish.. talents always remain somewhere within..
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~Yllek Sep 17, 2007   Writer
Hmm, I dunno...
I'd say it can vanish... At least, it seems to here... =(

Or at least taken a leaf out of Energy's book and just converted itself into a new, as of yet undiscovered, form? I'd prefer that to losing it completely; but I don't hold my breath.

=)
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:iconjepuisadore17:
Sometimes remembering the feelings that you felt when writing it, and then taking hold of feelings in that way again, lets you write like you used to.
The talent isn't gone, the talent is either not used or used in different ways, like you said :)
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:iconsugaranddeath:
wow!!! i`m shocked!!1 this is sooo good!!! ;) (looks like my suicide note...somehow...but mine is in romanian...so...a bit difficult to understand:D)
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~Yllek Mar 20, 2005   Writer
Thank you!
Romanian? Such a sweet country, the origins of the vampire legends, and such a beautifully dark language.
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